Thursday 15 January 2015

Blogging Health Check 1

Teacher's feedback:

Hi Rizwana,

You have an excellent blog so far. Well done. You write thoughtful and detailed posts - your posts on your analysis of your favourite film and of Se7en were both excellent - and you also use a wide range of ICT to convey your research insights - your posts on genres and sub genres was extremely well laid out (though it would've have been nice to see Mean Girls analysed more) and your post on Juno is similar (though some more photos would have helped. You are doing exactly what we've asked for at the moment, though you need to get your remake posted and an analyses completed asap. If you continue to blog in this way and take this effort into your planning, you should secure a good grade. 15/20 – grade b currently.

Dan



To improve: 
  • I can be more up to date with my blogs 
  • Watch more teen drama movies to get a better insight and understanding of different elements such as mise-en-scene 
  • I could also analyse more of the movies i've researched in more detail.

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