Marked by Rebecca:
41 posts at health check 2. An improvement on health check 1, which is reflected in your increase mark. There is room for further development and further increase in marks through blogging off the checklist more and more frequently. I really need you to go back and complete blog 28 (influential films) as this is really important for your research. Make sure that you blog a minimum of three times a week until the end of the unit.
To improve I will need to go back and improve the (28) post mentioned here. Also I will try and correct anything in previous posts to ensure it is good enough - i.e. grammar, as well as photographs and embedded ICT
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